peer review

riter’s Name venise wilson

Paper Title none

Date 4/06/2011

Editor’s Name venise wilson

Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

 there is no topic

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

I believe the old way of preparing jerk chicken is much healthier than the way I do it today,because
they used fresher and organic ingredients compared to the frozen and canned domestic ingredients that i use today.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

I think it is organized. the first sentences correspond with what the writer wants to say.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

Clarity is not the main issue , but there are some grammer problem. there were chicken instead of chickens.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

no there is no sources

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain. the greatest strength is the organization