10 topic

1. school lunch

2.top water vs bottle water
3.how does American eat
4.how chicken raises
5.farming of fish
6.calories guide line
7.colors in cereal
8.food that feed  to sick people
9.Tyson chicken
10. MSG
11.can food
12.how to make hospital food healthier
13.ensure "final"

banning food stamps

Food stamp is for the poor, not for malnourished person or unhealthy person. I think that the people who are buying the food should be the one to decide whether they want soda in their diet or not. The amount of food stamp that is issue to a family of three can not buy that much healthy food that will last for the next food stamp period. So they have to force to buy what is on sale in the super market, which is normally soda,which causes ninety nine cents on sale...

fast food nation and super sizeme

After watch documentary film "Super Size Me" and read chapter two in "Fast Food Nation" I realize how much advertisement and the location of business can affect people eating habit.The million dollars ads, senior citizens discount, a play area and free children toys can definetly draw the attention to McDonald. McDonald is located in almost  every five to ten blocks in Manhattan.This make it convience for people to purchse their food than any other fast food restaurants.Even though Morgan Spurlock was on a McDonald diet for a month and get sick, he could easily get sick eating any other fast food.My point is that all fast food restaurant is not healthy for us, but McDonald make it harder for people to avoid going there by being every where. I believe that the present of McDonald, contribute to the public unhealthy eating habits. One of McDonald meal consist of more sodium than the daily amount that is required. Sodium is known as the number one contribution to heart attack. Also their meal have more sugar than the daily value. No wonder the United States have so many people with type two diabetes. Our children like McDonald because it offer toys in their happy meals and a place to play in their restaurants. McDonald infulence children by the bright colors of their restaurant, their clowns,toys and as their theme song " I'm loving it" They also attract senior citizens by offering a discount on special days. We the people should protest for healthier menus from the fast food restaurants.For starters instead of grind up parts of chicken that makes chicken nuggets they should offer chicken finger that make with a solid chicken breast.The cashier should ask would you like no salt on your fries instead of asking what size would you like.They should also offer more fruit choices for sides and use more nutritious vegetables in thier salads and burgers. They should use less salt in their food and use ligth mayonise instead of regular.McDonald cashier shoud ask the customer if they want cheese or not.They should stop spend so much money and advertisement, instead put a organic salad on the menu, offer organic milk for the happy meals instead of regular milk and offer natual juice instead of artificial.This is not going to stop the obesity epidemic instantly, but it might help people make a healthier choice of eating in a fast food restaurant. Which could prevent heart attack,diabetes and obesity.

peer review

riter’s Name venise wilson

Paper Title none

Date 4/06/2011

Editor’s Name venise wilson

Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

 there is no topic

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

I believe the old way of preparing jerk chicken is much healthier than the way I do it today,because
they used fresher and organic ingredients compared to the frozen and canned domestic ingredients that i use today.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

I think it is organized. the first sentences correspond with what the writer wants to say.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

Clarity is not the main issue , but there are some grammer problem. there were chicken instead of chickens.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

no there is no sources

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain. the greatest strength is the organization